Hot+Lava


 * I did not like this story at all I thought it was stupid. To me it did'nt make any sence and I defintly would not recomind it to anyone else cause it's not worth reading. No I did'nt like the character either.**


 * This story could relate to some teenagers since the whole zit thing but it's not realistic because nobady I know is going to sit there and talk about how big their zits are getting. Cause everybody can see them we do not need a discription.**


 * The message in the story is weird cause I do not get it, but no I don't think it relates to most people, probably some. "I will drill a hole in the very center of the soccer field" like seriously who says that. That's one of the reasons why I think this is story is stupid.**